Lin and her flatmate welcome a new tenant into their student apartment during the hottest summer of their master's degree. Life seems to change as the dishes in the sink start to pile up.
I really liked the depth you've managed to imbue these characters with in so few words and they way they interact with each other. My favorite scene is probably the one with the bilingual, artsy (as I imagined it) flyers and the bringing iced tea to Runa's room - it almost felt like a sensory experience that I was having along with the narrator. Very cool piece of writing!
Also, to add, the metaphor and existence of the plants was both funny and emotionally rich. Loved that detail as well.
I really liked the depth you've managed to imbue these characters with in so few words and they way they interact with each other. My favorite scene is probably the one with the bilingual, artsy (as I imagined it) flyers and the bringing iced tea to Runa's room - it almost felt like a sensory experience that I was having along with the narrator. Very cool piece of writing!
Catchy start, amazing development and a thoughtful turnaround. All in one in Moonlight Arcade āØšš¼